Black Ghost

Thanxs! :D I hadn't noticed I used those phrases too much. I'll try my best to fix it :)

OF COURSE ITS NOT! i was just saying a lot will happen in the next ch. thats all. the length of it has nothing to do with how good it ...

thanx, I will try my hardest on the next chapter, I will probably be the longest yet. I just wanted to get this small part out of the way since ...

its sand

I hope you keep going! Very interesting story, good description.

wow, really nice story!

thanx i am not the best at description but i will try my best to add some. -Tony

wow, that was really good, I like it a lot. I felt really sorry for the bird and I really enjoyed your description. Keep going!

awesome! stupendous! synonyms for those words! Haifa would be proud! (i don't really know)

Interesting beggining but some people may not agree with you. Like me cuz i think life is short. But never mind me and Is going to be a story or ...

it thought it was funny although it didn't really rhyme(i dont think it's supposed too) anyway it was good.(what is c-day? christmas?) really caputres a girl when she gets the ...

Ok i think that you have to

I really really enjoyed this story. There is no more critiquing to be done but i just wanted to say that it kept me interested the whole time and has ...

I hope everyone likes my new story!

simply. amazing.